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Professor VICTOR FUNG (馮強教授) deanfungenglish.blogspot.com ; deanfungenglish@gmail.com MPhil (Cambridge) Teach academic English writing to associate-degree & high-dip students in Beacon College (遵理英专); Chair professor, Ta Kung Int'l Media Institute; Tel: 34117632 author of :錯在哪裏?常見英語病句>>(7.2013) 读香港时事学英语>>;你一定要懂的字彙570>> 這900個詞彙助我成為南華早報首位華人副總編輯>>(7.2014). freelance jobs: (1) write speeches for executives; (2) teach (in workshops) English writing, English editing, PR writing, crisis communication and media management; (3) polish essays for AD, undergraduate and graduate students.


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馮強,中大新聞傳播和英文系一級榮譽畢業(全班考第一),劍橋大學及港大碩士。曾任職《華爾街日報》及加拿大《金融郵報》記者、《南華早報》副總編輯、《讀者文摘》總編輯、香港兩所大學公關處處長,現任香港浸會大學傳理學院國際新聞和財經新聞碩士課程主任。2009年出版《瘋讀社論、強化英語》。2010年在《
最後六任港督的聲音》一書內分析多位前港督發表的講詞。他在2011年5月出版<<生活英語小智慧>>一書。
他目前是3项新闻奖的评判。馮強繼續寫強化英語的書,幫助讀者在學習、職場和人生上更上層樓。(女兒奔奔考IELTS試獲9分滿分。)1. Author: <<瘋讀社論強化英語>> 2. Co-author: << 最後六任港督的聲音>> 3. Author: <<生活英語小智慧>>; 4. Author: <<學會演說、改變你的人生>> 7.2011; Blog: deanfungenglish.blogspot.com/<<巔峰[強化英語]日報>>;twitter.com/deanfung1; facebook.com/victorkfung; www.linkedin.com/pub/victor-fung/33/893/31b;Guitarist of the band "南山浪人"; Motto: "no envy & no fear" (bio: V graduated 1st in his JLM class, became China correspondent 4 the WSJ/Asia,deputy chief editor of the SCMP, chief ed of Reader's Digest and PR director at 2 varsities be4 becom' a teacher in '08.)


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2011年11月21日 星期一

Children to help parents kick habit (note 1)

Plain cigarette packaging is not on the cards (note 2) anytime soon for Hong Kong, but there is to be a program for kids to help parents quit smoking (戒菸).

That was the word from Director of Health Lam Ping-yan as he explained that a watch (監察) will be kept on how Australia does with its world- first (全球第一) effort to see all brands of cigarettes in the same drab but alarming (note 3) packets.

The priority for Hong Kong just now, Lam said, is to introduce more quit-smoking clinics (戒菸.診所) and increase efforts at the ones already in operation.

The Department of Health currently runs six clinics on its own or through joint efforts, and funding will be increased for more services in clinics at Tung Wah and Pok Oi hospitals. "We'll also involve the Po Leung Kuk for a school-based (以學校為基地) program so that children can go home and ask their parents to quit," Lam said.

In addition, "there is a program for ethnic minorities (少數民族), and we will finance a hotline (熱線) service run by University of Hong Kong professors."

On Australia's packaging program, the head of the country's Department of Health and Ageing, Jane Halton, noted that legislation on packaging has yet to clear (note 4) the Senate.

"Obviously, the tobacco companies are not happy with this, but the legislation has passed the House of Representatives," she said.

"It's our belief that we have the numbers for it to pass the Senate. So this will be implemented (實施) in 2012."

The packaging plan, she added, is a major step (note 5) "in making sure that smoking is in no way glamorized (美化) or promoted in Australia - and particularly for young people."
From good to better English:

(note 1) kick habit=戒掉嗜好〔尤指毒癮〕。Habit=習慣,癖好。Habit is second nature=習慣成自然。the habit of getting up late=晚起的習慣。break off a bad habit of=改掉壞習慣。

(note 2) on the cards=在時間表上 (on schedule)。例句: Bo Bo’s first baby arrived right on schedule= Bo Bo的第一個嬰兒準時出生。 a train schedule=火車時刻表。on schedule (time)=準時。

(note 3) drab but alarming= drab (單調,乏味); alarming=使人驚慌的;引起驚慌的。the drab of country life=蟄居鄉間的單調生活。Alarm=警報, 鬧鐘, 警報器, 驚慌, 恐懼, 擔憂。alarm bell =警鈴, 警鐘。alarm clock= 鬧鐘。

(note 4) has yet to clear=還沒有批准。has yet to=還沒有。Julian is not home yet=Julian is not yet home=Julian還沒有回家。Clear=通暢的;開闊的,豁然的, 無疑的,的確的,確實的。Do I make myself clear?=你明白我的意思嗎?。A clear head=清晰的頭腦。A clear sky=晴空。

(note 5) a major step=重要的一步。Step=跨入,踏進。Step back=後退,後退一步。Step in=走進。

Victor’s View: It is great and useful to involve children to help their parents quit smoking. We should try all methods to turn Hong Kong into a ‘smoke-free’ society.

(Victor Fung Keung, director of HK Baptist University’s M.A. in international journalism program, has published 4 books on English-enhancement [the latest, titled <<學會演說、改變你的人生>>, was published on July 18] and plans to write 6 more by the end of 2012. Write to him: deanfungenglish@gmail.com)

2011年11月20日 星期日

Six years for sex fiend (魔王) who scared (恐嚇) girl with `evil spirits'

An unemployed man who used threats of hoodoos and magic spells (note 1) to force his girlfriend's younger sister into having sex with him has been jailed for six years.

Yuen Yuk-kin, 43, a self-proclaimed (note 2 ) fung shui master (風水大師), showed no emotion as District Court Judge Frankie Yiu Fun- che yesterday slammed (批評) him for using sordid (骯髒的) excuses and threats to coerce the victim - identified as X - into having sexual intercourse and even anal sex with him on multiple occasions (note 3)between September 2004 and January this year.

The judge said Yuen exploited (利用) the victim's trust at a time of innocence and weak health.

The experience has left the victim, now a university student, with post- traumatic stress disorder (note4), depression, low self-esteem and "difficulty in trying to have a normal sex life." The court heard Yuen first tricked X - then aged 15 - into having sex with him on September 24, 2004, so that he could "transfer chi" to cure a fever that plagued her for weeks. She was also asked to perform oral sex.

The judge noted the victim was below the legal age of consent (note 5) at the time.

The victim was told the "evil" came from her having sex with her former boyfriend, and that she had to swallow Yuen's sperm to seal "the entrance" to prevent it from returning after it had been expelled (趕出).

On two occasions between 2005 and 2006, X was tricked (欺騙) into having anal sex which, she said, caused her pain and resulted in incontinence.

In later years Yuen exerted control (note 6) over X's social life, warning that her mother will have cancer if she did not continue to sleep with him.

From good to better English:

(note 1) hoodoos and magic spells=不祥之物, 惡運(hoodoos)和符咒,咒語 (spells)。be bound by a spell= be under the spell=給符咒鎮住。break a spell=破除魔力和吸引力。

(note 2) self-proclaimed=自稱的,自封的。Proclaim=聲明;表示,顯示, 公佈。Proclaim Victor a traitor=宣佈Victor為叛徒。 proclaim war=宣戰。 proclaim a victory=宣告勝利。

(note 3) multiple occasions=多次在不同情況下。Multiple=複式的,多數的,多樣的。Occasion=機會, 時刻。Bo Bo was the occasion of the trouble=Bo Bo是糾紛的根源。on great occasions=在大慶[盛典]時期。

(note 4) post- traumatic stress disorder=創傷後遺症, 簡稱PTSD。Traumatic=損傷的,創傷的。Trauma= (精神)創傷。

(note 5) legal age of consent=合法年齡〔尤指少女法律上達到可以自主的年齡〕。Consent to do=同意,贊成,應允,答應。consent to a proposal=贊同提案。 consent to give a lecture=答應演講。with the consent of Julian=得到Julian同意。

(note 6) exerted control=控制。Exert=行使, 發揮。exert an influence=施加影響。Victor exerts himself to the utmost= Victor已盡全力。

Victor’s View: People taking advantage of young girls’ innocence should be condemned and severely punished. Teenagers should always stay alert.

(Victor Fung Keung, director of HK Baptist University’s M.A. in international journalism program, has published 4 books on English-enhancement [the latest, titled <<學會演說、改變你的人生>>, was published on July 18] and plans to write 6 more by the end of 2012. Write to him: deanfungenglish@gmail.com)

2011年11月14日 星期一

Don’t coddle students who default on loans

Victor Fung Keung says we should name and

shame those who use the money to speculate

Officials at the Student Financial Assistance

Agency should feel

ashamed for proposing

unworkable solutions to clamp

down on student loan defaults. It’s

a no-brainer. The agency’s

suggestion to lengthen the

repayment period and lower

interest rates will help to increase

the number of defaults, not cut it.

Because the loan schemes are

non-means-tested, many

university students borrow the

money (which can be as much as

HK$400,000) to gamble in the

stock market or elsewhere. If they

make a killing, they repay the loan.

If they lose every cent, they simply

walk away. If push comes to shove,

they declare bankruptcy. They

seem pretty sure the government

can’t touch them.

The school year that ended in

August 2010 saw a 20 per cent rise

in loan defaults from a year earlier.

About 13,000 graduates failed to

repay loans totalling

HK$213 million, which, of course,

is taxpayers’ hard-earned money.

The relevant government

departments should shame these

irresponsible so-called elite of

Hong Kong by prosecuting each

one of them.

The student-loan agency

should also share the credit data of

these graduates with other credit

agencies so that all banks, and

perhaps their prospective

employers, would know how

selfish they are.

The agency’s current proposals

are a non-starter. They will only

worsen the situation. Indeed,

university students who plan to

speculate in the stock market with

the money would welcome the

news with glee that borrowing

rates will be cut to 1.674 per cent a

year from 3.174 per cent, and the

repayment period lengthened to 17

years (including a grace period of

two years), from 10.

Under the agency’s

misconceived suggestions,

taxpayers have to dole out another

HK$75 million a year.

Why should we subsidise those

immoral graduates who lose

money in speculation? Can anyone

reconcile the fact that Hong Kong’s

economy improved last year and

yet the number of student loan

defaults jumped by 20 per cent?

The rise in defaults underscores

the fact that moral education in

Hong Kong’s education system has

room for improvement.

It’s hardly news that a huge

number of university students sell

their rights to buy computers at a

discount to “professional traders”

to make a fast buck. The discount

scheme is offered to university

students at the beginning of an

academic year.

Naming and shaming the

defaulters is the only solution to

deter these irresponsible students.

They must be warned of the dire

consequence of not paying back

their loans. Deterrence is the only

weapon.

Victor Fung Keung, based in

Hong Kong, is a commentator on

education and political issues

2011年11月13日 星期日

Alert on deadly polio (小兒麻痹症/脊髓灰質炎) outbreak (爆發 )

The toll (人數) from polio in Xinjiang is expected to rise beyond the 17 known cases, the World Health Organization warns.

The virus that claimed the health of (note 1) nine adults and eight children aged from four months to two years is linked to the wild polio virus type 1 circulating in Pakistan, said Oliver Rosenbauer, the WHO spokesman for the Global Polio Eradication Initiative in Geneva.

"My bet (note 2) is we will see more cases," Rosenbauer said. "Certainly it will not be surprising."

WHO director-general Margaret Chan Fung Fu-chun told The Standard earlier that the virus likely reached Xinjiang from neighboring Pakistan.

The Ministry of Health in Beijing informed the WHO on August 26 that wild polio had been isolated in four youngsters with the onset of (note 3) paralysis (癱瘓) between July 3 and 19.

But last month it reported 10 polio cases from three prefectures (縣) in the south of the Xinjiang Uygur Autonomous Region.

A WHO team is in Xinjiang to help control the outbreak.

China was said to be virtually (幾乎) polio-free (note 4) by 1994.

The last reported wild polio virus case in the country, in 1999, was linked to India.

"Because of an ongoing endemic circulation in Pakistan you run the risk that a polio-free area becomes re-infected (重新受感染)," Rosenbauer noted.

But he does not think Hong Kong faces an obvious risk, given the high immunization coverage and surveillance (高度的防疫制度或監察) here.

As for Xinjiang, Rosenbauer does not expect polio to "spread like wildfire" (note 5) like it did last year in Takijistan, which saw about 400 people taken ill.

But it might be a year or more before it can be said to have been beaten back (擊退).

From good to better English:

(note 1) claimed the lives of=殺害 (kill)。claim =斷言;聲稱,自稱。claim expenses= 索取費用。claim for damages = 要求賠償損失 。no claims = 無權要求。claim a victory=聲稱取得勝利。claim a reward=要求報酬。Claim的同義詞有affirm, allege, argue, assert, asseverate, aver, avouch, avow, contend, declare, hold, maintain, say, state等。

(note 2) My bet=斷定, 我的意見是。My bet is that Julian won't come=我看Julian不會來了。A heavy [paltry] bet=大[小]賭。I'll bet my life=我敢用生命擔保;當然,保管沒錯。Do you ever bet? Victor asks Bo Bo= Victor 問Bo Bo, 你和人家打過賭嗎?

(note 3) with the onset of=出現, 病發作 (A beginning; a start)。onset的同義詞有 beginning, birth, commencement, dawn, genesis, inception, nascence, nascency, opening, origin, outset, spring, start等。

(note 4) polio-free=沒有小兒麻痹症。feel free= 無需拘束, 不要客氣。for free= 免費。free association = 自由聯想 。free from= 沒有, 免於。free from blame = 解除責備, 免責。 free love = 自由戀愛 。free rein = 完全的行動自由。 free speech= 言論自由 。free will = 自由意志, 自由抉擇。 give someone a free hand = 放手讓某人做。.

(note5 ) spread like wildfire=像野火一樣散播。

Victor’s View: Polio is a terrible disease. We must ensure that it won’t spread to Hong Kong from Xinjiang.

(Victor Fung Keung, director of HK Baptist University’s M.A. in international journalism program, has published 4 books on English-enhancement [the latest, titled <<學會演說、改變你的人生>>, was published on July 18] and plans to write 6 more by the end of 2012. Write to him: deanfungenglish@gmail.com)

2011年11月11日 星期五

回到母校

回到母校   - 馮強

我選擇夏天探訪我的母校劍橋大學是有原因的,因為一年中天氣最好就是6、7、8這三個月。我回到劍橋胡佛遜學院看看我以前住過的宿舍,然後跑到學生飯堂吃午飯,大概要80港元。我付款的時候,收銀員問我拿學生證給她看,我說我是路過的校友。飯堂主人馬上說「既然是難得回來的校友,你不用付款了!」午飯後我當然要去看看劍橋有名氣的橋,一條是大家熟悉的「康橋」。另一條叫「嘆息橋」(The Bridge of Sigh)。劍橋河上只見不少遊客在「撐船」(punting)。我回到市中心在一商店內買了一條校呔,花了我300港元。買校呔主要是人總有點懷愐過去的情懷。正如詩人徐志摩在「再別康橋」這首詩一樣,「我揮一揮衣袖,不帶走一片雲彩」。再別了母校,再別了「康橋」。
倫敦著名的音樂場地「Royal Albert Hall」正宣傳歌星Donovan將會與倫敦現代集團(London Contemporary Orchestra)共同演出。我很喜歡Donovan的「民謠樂與怒」(Folk-Rock Music)。他是在1970年代的紅星,今年已經65歲。他的一首《Catch The Wind》令人百聽不厭。我相信他在演唱會上一定會唱這首歌。歌詞其中一段是這樣的:「When rain has hung the leaves with tears, I want you near, to kill my fears , to help me to leave all my blues behind.」(雨水掛在樹葉上,像淚珠一樣。我渴望你在我身旁,消除我的恐懼,助我把憂愁都拋諸腦後。)雖然我沒有欣賞Donovan的演出,但我到店舖看到偶像Paul Simon的新大碟《So Beautiful Or So What》,真的是喜出望外。
我最喜愛的倫敦「地鐵」站叫Victoria(因為我的名字叫Victor)。在Victoria站附近有間叫Hesperia的酒店,每天房租1500港元,算是很便宜了。我對倫敦很熟悉。我在劍橋大學唸書的日子,每星期都要到倫敦的SOAS(School Of Oriental And African Studies)學院的圖書館做研究和寫論文。(我的題目是分析中國1978年後的開放政策,劍橋的資料沒有SOAS學院那麼新)。下午我到Kensington王宮參觀,這是戴安 娜生前住的地方。可惜王宮正在改建,要到2012年春天才再開放給遊人參觀。第二天我去參加一位親戚的婚禮,播出的音樂是「披頭四」的《Here Comes The Sun》。晚宴上一位親戚推薦我看《Half-Time》這本書,他說對我的靈性會有幫助。
我由劍橋坐火車到約克市(York)遊玩。到約克火車站時我跑到旅遊詢問處想買張「全日通」的巴士票。那位接待員看見我便問:「Mate, what can I do for you?」(喂老友,要幫忙嗎?)Mate這個字多在澳洲使用,在英國較少聽到。它的意思是My friend。它原來的意思是伴侶(同居或結了婚的)。接待員對我說在York 遊玩不用坐車,因為所有景點都只需要步行15分鐘左右便到達,包括大教堂、堡壘和City Walls(城牆)。City Walls有點似西安市的城牆,令人不免有點思古的幽情。我進入一間英式餐廳午膳,這間叫 Bettys Tea House的食肆的女侍應全是中年婦人,不是年輕貌美的東歐「外勞」。
我跟著在蘇格蘭的Edinburgh(愛丁堡)逗留了三天。在火車站附近有條叫Royal Mile的大道。這裏的一端是城堡,沿山下走去,經過大教堂,最後去到Holyrood Palace。這是數百年前蘇格蘭女王Queen Mary住過的地方。她一生「命苦」,出世數月父親便離世,媽媽是法國人,帶她回巴黎接受教育。她16歲結婚,但丈夫兩年後逝世。我花了130元港幣參觀完王宮後便到一間餐館晚膳,原來由下午5時到7時這時段叫Pre-theatre,一頓飯約需120港元,比正常價平3分1。Pre-theatre源於蘇格蘭人吃完飯後要去看7時30分開場的歌劇。這時段美國人叫Early-bird 。第二天早上我爬上Calton Hill最高的地方,眺望海洋,藍天碧海,微風輕拂我的臉。人生夫復何求!

2011年11月9日 星期三

好標題共賞:

[Slap happy] <<掌得很開心 >>; [Last stand] <<最後一檔>>; [The ball's in your court'] <<輪到你做決定>>

背景: 2011年香港報業公會的評委選出去年本地報章的最佳標題,共三則。

[Slap happy] <<掌得很開心>> A local judge has spared (note 1) the niece of a top Hong Kong judge a prison term (note 2) although she has been convicted for a third time of slapping (note 3) a police officer.

[Last stand] <<最後一檔>> The newsstand slowly fades out (note 4) in Hong Kong due to competition from chain stores (note 4), news online, declining newspaper sales, free newspapers and government regulation.

[The ball's in your court'] <<輪到你做決定>>A transsexual's (note 5) request to marry her boyfriend has been rejected (note 6) by a local judge and the judge tells the government to consider whether it’s time it changed the law.

好英文辭彙共賞:

(note 1) spare =使某人免遭(麻煩等)。Can you spare me a few minutes, Julian?=Julian, 你能抽幾分鐘和我談談嗎?spare no efforts =不遺餘力。(note 2) a prison term =坐監。(note 3) slap =一 巴掌, 一個耳光。slap Victor on the back=拍拍Victor 的脊背〔表示贊許〕。(note 4) chain stores =便利店。(note 5) transsexual =變性人。(note 6) rejected =拒絕。

短評共賞: 寫標題有不同的技巧,包括Exaggeration (誇張overstates the case); Tabloidese (小報化, 用Boob 而不用 breast); Pun (玩文字, play on words); Variation (多樣化); Rhetoric (加強語氣, language to persuade or impress); Litotes (低調處理, understatement); Metonymy (相關辭語, name of a related thing); Oxymoron (反語, contradictory terms); Alliteration (首字同音, same initial sound); Assonance (字彙同音, similar vowel)和Black humor (黑色幽默, make fun of people’s disability)。這三個標題很明顯用Pun (玩文字) 和Metonymy (相關辭語)這兩種技巧。[-happy]是很常見的英語用法,例如trigger-happy (愛開槍的人); Slap happy就像(愛掌刮他人的人)。另外,Last stand的stand 是newspaper stand (報攤)的簡寫。[The ball's in your court'] <<輪到你做決定>>這個標題最過癮, 法官判了變性人不能結婚, 然後叫政府去考慮改例,就是把皮球(ball)拋給政府。Ball也可以是變性人割下來的ball (睾丸)。

2011年11月8日 星期二

Extend mentor scheme to help community ills

Victor Fung Keung hails an initiative to involve former mental patients in the treatment of others

Nov 08, 2011

Castle Peak Hospital's management and staff are to be congratulated for introducing a recovery-orientated approach by employing former patients as mentors for those in the mental health system. In this way, the counsellors can help show the mentally ill that it's possible to enjoy a full recovery and lead a normal life.

I would now urge the hospital's authorities and those from other hospitals with psychiatric services to go one step further to benefit hundreds of thousands of locals by extending counselling sessions to the community.

A small place in community centres across various districts could be rented or requested (with district councils' help), staffed with former patients who could act as counsellors. They should be known as "happiness centres" rather than "mental health counselling centres".

Several recent surveys have shown that about 17 per cent of Hong Kong people are mentally ill. That translates to roughly 1.1 million people. Consulting a private psychiatrist is expensive (the bulk of insurance companies don't cover such expenses) and getting an appointment to visit a government psychiatrist takes at least six months. And many people don't want to get help because of the social stigma attached to being labelled "mentally ill".

A lack of education, perhaps combined with taboos at home, means that most Hongkongers believe that if someone is mentally ill, they must be suffering from something serious, such as bipolar disorder, psychopathic illness or schizophrenia. The only picture people have in their mind is of screaming patients waving choppers in public places.

In fact, depression and anxiety, symptoms that many of us might suffer, are very common forms of mild mental illness. If former patients at Castle Peak Hospital can share their experiences about how they have successfully dealt with their problems, many others might be willing to visit such centres and ultimately benefit.

In fact, the money saved from treating serious cases in future could far outweigh the cost of setting up such centres.

Under a recovery-oriented approach, counsellors serve as a bridge between doctors and patients. The latter will definitely find inspiration from counsellors, who have shown it is possible to regain one's dignity, family life and the respect of others.

The Chinese talk of "treating an ailment while it is light". It would clearly be beneficial for people suffering from depression and anxiety to seek advice early before these symptoms become worse.

Medical authorities in Hong Kong should treat the idea of a recovery-oriented approach as a step forward, and embrace it.

Victor Fung Keung, based in Hong Kong, is a commentator on education and political issues